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advanced Ellipsis and SUbstitution




SESSION 1 (80 min) ANTICIPATION

Part 1 – “The Echo Chamber” ( 15- 20 min)

  1. Instruction: Give students a short, 5-line dialogue where every noun and verb is repeated (e.g., “Do you want coffee? Yes, I want coffee. I think coffee is good.”).
  2. Task: In pairs, students must “slash” every word they think is unnecessary without losing the meaning.
  3. Theory: Introduce the term Economy of Language: Good writers say more with less.

Part 2: Vocabulary Development (15 min)

The teacher explicitly introduces key vocabulary needed for the lesson, ensuring students clearly understand meaning and use. The words include:

  • Redundancy: The state of being no longer useful or needed.
  • Omission: Leaving something out.
  • Anaphoric: Referring back to something previously mentioned.
  • Succinct: Briefly and clearly expressed.
  • Cohesive: Formed into a united whole.
  • Synonymous: Having the same or similar meaning.


Part 3: Grammar Introduction using Presentation (20 min)

Grammar Introduction: Ellipsis and Substitution


Theory:

  • Ellipsis: Removing words that are understood from context.
    • Example: “I’ve been to Rome, but she hasn’t [been to Rome].”
  • Substitution: Using words like do/does, so/not, one/ones.
    • Example: “I don’t like the red shirt; I prefer the blue one.”
    • Example: “Will it rain? I hope not.” (Replaces “I hope it doesn’t rain”).

Part 4: Guided Practice (25 min)

Grammar Practice: “The Minimalist Challenge” (25 min)*

  • Instruction: Provide a 200-word academic paragraph that is intentionally repetitive.
  • Task: Students must rewrite it using at least 5 instances of ellipsis and 5 substitutions.
  • Check: Peer-review in groups of three to see who achieved the “cleanest” flow.

“The Script Doctor” (40 min)

Activity: “The Script Doctor”

  1. Instruction: Provide a transcript of a clunky, repetitive movie scene or political interview.
  2. Task: Students act as “editors,” rewriting the dialogue to sound more natural and sophisticated using the target grammar.
  3. Output: Students perform their “before” and “after” versions to hear the rhythmic difference.

Part 1 – ( 2 x 40min)

Reinforcement:

  • Period 1 (40 min) – Creative Production: *The Chain Story: In groups, students write a collaborative story. Student A writes a sentence; Student B must write the next sentence using ellipsis or substitution to link them.
    • Goal: Create a 15-sentence story that flows perfectly.
  • Period 2 (40 min) – Assessment:
    • The “Spot the Gaps” Quiz: A 10-question digital quiz (Forms/Kahoot).
    • Part A: Identify where words were omitted.
    • Part B: Choose the correct substitute (e.g., “so” vs “not”, “do” vs “does”).
    • Part C: Rewrite 3 sentences for maximum emphasis.

NEE – Agregar el tipo de adaptaciones curriculares

Principio II: Pautas 6.1 – 6.3 – 6.4 
Principio III: Pautas 7.1 – 8.1 – 9.1
ALUMNO 1: Constante monitoreo. Dar tiempo adicional para el desarrollo de la actividad y se reduce el número de ejercicios o se modifican los ejercicios con un nivel de dificultad reducido, de acuerdo con sus necesidades académicas. 
ALUMNO 2: Constante monitoreo, Dar tiempo adicional para el desarrollo de la actividad y se reduce el número de ejercicios o se modifican los ejercicios con un nivel de dificultad reducido, de acuerdo con sus necesidades académicas.
ALUMNO 3: Constante monitoreo. Corroborar que el contenido entregado en clase haya sido comprendido por la estudiante mediante retroalimentación.